Bat in the Dining Room

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(1997, Marshall Cavendish, illustrations by S.D. Schindler; previously published in The North American Review) 

What it's about:
    One summer night, a bat 
 
        "flew into the dining room 
          at the hotel restaurant 
          by the lake. 
          Mistake."

From this mistake, chaos ensues: panic on the part of the guests dining at the restaurant, the waiters, maitre d', and chef. Only one little girl keeps a cool head: "Strange Melissa / at school they called her weird." Quietly, she frees the terrified bat --- just at the moment its life appears imperiled. She is praised: "They called her kind to animals, and smart / but no one had a clue / no one even knew / what was in her heart." 
I hope the reader does, though: that there is a sympathy between two creatures who are both a bit otherworldly, and love and live in their own freedom-protecting, sometimes solitary ways.  
When and how CD came to write Bat in the Dining Room
At the time I wrote this story, I owned a country inn, not by a lake, but by a park... and a bat did get in its dining room. We didn't have any guests that night, but I wondered "What if we had had guests?" Because I'm a pretty easy-going, nature-loving person myself, but when I'd walked in and seen it circling around, I was startled too; I gasped and felt a bit of fear. 

But mostly, I felt sorry for the bat. It was so trapped. I kept trying various unsuccessful ways to get it out (most of which the more hysterical  characters in the story, like those pictured above, try). 

Then I recalled I'd heard somewhere that bats have a kind of radar which allows them depth perception despite their poor vision. I hit on the same solution Melissa finds; just open the exit door. And out it flew. 
I couldn't stop thinking about that moment when the bat finally flew out. I thought about it for two days. Finally I said to myself, 'Okay, why don't you write about it and see why this is so moving to you?' I sat down at the computer and began. Up until the moment I started writing I felt I might write an essay, for grown-ups, about the experience of the bat  --- but this is the story flowed out, almost exactly as it is.
About the illustrations and illustrator
S.D. Schindler's pictures are very well-done and very funny. I've gotten used to them, but they are not what I would have picked for the book at all --- I pictured something much more mysterious than funny, more painterly and sensual and serious. But I think S. D. and my editor, Judith, felt that the text was serious enough, and its humorous side should be brought out.  
Who it's dedicated to and why
This story was dedicated to do very dear, very old friends, Louis and Elsie Freund, both artists. They truly did "open doors and encourage flight," as Melissa does. Louis is dead now, but Elsie is still very much alive, traveling, and painting. I gratefully count these two among my mentors. (Left, Melissa looks up and sees the bat against the night sky for just a moment after opening the door.) 
Reviewers and readers say...

"an evocative, lyrical prose poem." 

  --- School Library Journal

"a surprising lovely book ... " lilting, loosely rhymed text about a bat who finds itself in an alien indoor environment...The human pandemonium ensues and observant little girl who imagines the way the bat must feel (and) lets it fly free ... her identifying with the frightened bat will draw readers in, and her pleasure at its escape provides a satisfying conclusion."       

 --- Kirkus Reviews

I'll tell you a secret...
This is one of my two favorite books to read aloud when I go to visit schools. I love the way the rhymes kind of fall over each other in the middle of sentences --- they surprised me as I was writing it and they still surprise me. It is also more dramatic than most of my other children's books: the bat really is in danger, and Melissa really is able to help it. Also, I feel a little like Melissa, and always have: strange, weird, like to be alone a lot, and a lot of my books are actually about this need for solitude. (You can read about this in my Autobiography).  

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