The Sanyasin's First Day

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a children's book by the late Ned Shank
(1999; illustrations by Catherine Stock, published by Marshall Cavendish)

What it's about
What could be a less likely topic for a children's book than the start of an ascetic life for a would-be Indian holy man? 
"It was the sanyasin's first day. He sat in the shade of a tree beside the busy road with his  walking-stick, dressed in his brand new orange cloth. He had given away everything he owned to lead the holy life of a sanyasin, to do nothing but pray, and walk from town to town, begging for just enough rice to fill his bowl." (Left, the book's cover.)
Yet this story, beautifully placed in a culture and land that will be exotic and fascinating to most readers, proves much less about the sanyasin (pronounced san-YAS-in) at all, but about the fear and self-mastery required on "first days" --- of, or at, anything. (Right, a young plumber --- female --- approaches her first customer's home with excitement and trepidation.) For those seeking more options about Indian culture, this thorough alphabetical listing of Best South Asian Children's books, by Dr. Sumana Reddy, offers a feast of  choices, each with a thoughtful mini-review.
With a gentle and reassuring folk-tale feeling, this story delights children, who, like the main characters, wrestle doubts and fears at the start of new enterprises.
The necessary terror of first days
For instance, there's the traffic policeman. On his first day, he "stood on the center island ... in the middle of the busy intersection in the center of town, eyeing the honking taxis and beeping three-wheeled open auto rickshaws and rumbling pain-decorated lorries and bicycles with their bells clanging and the oxcarts from the country all around him."  Who wouldn't be scared amidst all that? 

No wonder that, despite the policeman's  "crisply ironed khaki shirt with braid looping over the right shoulder," his hands "in white gloves" and the "silvery metal whistle on a white cord"; despite his training, both at school and "at home in front of the mirror", to move his "gloved hands with authority... to guide traffic smoothly," the young scared traffic cop
(pictured above right at work ) is now saying his prayers: "Oh please, let me direct the traffic safely and quickly." 
Confronting their anxieties
First day jitters afflict not only the just-graduated plumber, the sanyasin, and the traffic policeman, but a small schoolboy and a young farmer. Readers watch each nervously confront his or her own anxiety, and continue forward through their respective first days. 

Each character, as it happens, does make a small mistake.  Yet as the reader alone can see, each mistake makes possible a fortuitous occurrence in the lives of one of the other neophytes --- including the sanyasin, whose rice bowl does not go empty by day's end. 
The writer explains how he came to write
In 1998, Ned explained to young readers when and how he came to write The Sanyasin's First Day:
"I was traveling in South India when I saw a jolly, very rotund sanyasin holding forth to a laughing crowd in a tiny bakery shop wrapped in an orange robe as stiff with starch as if brand new, he looked almost like an Indian Santa Claus! Since sanyasins are usually very skinny, the incongruity was enormous. I mentioned it to a French friend that evening. He quipped, "Perhaps it was his first day."
"I thought about it and I realized: everyone has a first day. I imagined how as a child in school, one of my teachers might have had her first day, and been nervous. But I as a child would never have thought so, being nervous myself. That began the idea for the book. (Left you will see a group of Indian school children and their teacher crossing a town's busy main intersection. Though you can't see him --- he's one page over --- the new policeman is guiding them safely through the traffic.) 
"Each person in the story seems to make mistakes. But are they mistakes? The apparent errors turn out to make everything come out fine in the story."
About the illustrations and illustrator
When the book first came out, Ned said: "I love these pictures. The illustrator, Catherine Stock, spent a month in southern India sketching. Her drawings --- which also incorporate bits of cut paper collage, are beautifully true to the text, the South Indian state of Kerala,  and how its people look." (Click on the picture to left to see the rice-farmer being misdirected to the market instead of the granary by the young policeman.  Can even the wrong directions turn out to be right?) 
Catherine Stock is a native of South Africa, who now divides her time between France and New York City. She has not only illustrated over sixty books (including one by Crescent's mother, Charlotte Zolotow ), she has illustrated and written several, including Sophie's Bucket. 
Who it's dedicated to and why
Ned noted, when the book was published: “This being my first book, I naturally dedicated it to my parents, who gave me my first day.”
Reviewers and readers say...
" ...  As in a six-degrees-of-separation story, the lives of these individuals intersect and touch other lives, until a child fills the holy man's bowl, answering the man's prayers at the end of his first day. Both the lively text and Stock's bright watercolor street scenes are packed with clear details--people, animals, auto rickshaws, bicycles, oxcarts, even someone on an elephant --- expressing the vitality of the crowd and also the fragile interpersonal connections that answer the sanyasin's prayer.  --- Booklist
"The pictures and stories convey the daily life of a few characters in India and culminate with the inter-connectedness of people in a culture. Very cleverly done, the book also depicts the interdependence necessary in any society."   --- Children's Book Review Service
"Follows four workers...on their first day of work in a city in India....Realistic watercolor paintings...bring to life the busy streets of an Indian city....This good read-aloud book has merit as an appealing evocation of life in India."  --- Library Talk
"Vivid atmosphere."   --- Publishers Weekly
" A serendipitous slice of life in India. Multi-culturalism at its best! Our kids related instantly, and found the story very satisfying. Each main character... make(s) a small mistake on a first day... The reader alone can see (how) each of these mistakes makes possible a fortuitous occurrence (and the way) things have a serendipitous way of working out far better than could have been imagined... powerful and spiritual... gently stated, not preachy... full of charm and good humor... comforting... an added plus is that these interweaving stories twist and travel through the crowded maze of colorful, detailed contemporary Indian village life --- markets, elephants, colorful saris, oxen pulling piled carts, a lively, busy population."  --- reader review, at Amazon.
 I'll tell you a secret...
Ned said: Actually, I'll tell you two secrets. 
"The first is, my illustrator, Catherine Stock, my wife Crescent, and I became friends during the course of this book. This is unusual.  Generally publishers prefer not to have writers and artists even meet, fearing that a writer's comments or opinions might influence the artist so much that he or she would have a hard time finding their own style and ideas. But because Catherine had not yet been to India, she wanted to talk to me. We wound up talking together, and e-mailing, and finally the three of us went out to dinner together when we were in New York. She ultimately went to South India, and has stayed in touch with us ever since. 

The second secret is that everyone, no matter what they do or how old they are, has a first day. And even though it is usually scary, it can come out all right.
Which is true for me as well, since this is the first children's book I ever wrote."
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